Review of The Battle of the Bookshops by Poppy Alexander
As promised, here’s my full review for the early release copy of The Battle of the Bookshops by Poppy Alexander.
First off, I had no idea I was walking into a Romeo-and-Juliet retelling here. But honestly, it wasn’t the worst thing. If anything, I actually loved that part the most, even though I wasn’t expecting it.
Now, let me be real with you, the first 100 pages? A struggle. I had to force myself through them. The writing just wasn’t clicking with me, and it was so slow. I couldn’t connect with Jules, and her situation didn’t really grab me. If you’ve seen other reviews, you probably already know about that part where Jules compares her boss denying her time off to genocide. That was in very poor taste, and I didn’t love it.
But thankfully, it started picking up after about 100 pages. The plot got moving, and the character development grew stronger. The big reveal about Roman’s plan to take down Capelthorne—the bookstore Jules and her great-aunt Flo both love—was when things started to get interesting.
There were a couple of side characters, but honestly, they didn’t add much. Charlie, for example, is this overly enthusiastic kid who works for free in exchange for listing books online and then somehow uncovers an ancient grimoire. I get it, the grimoire part does eventually play into the plot, but Charlie himself was a bit much. I couldn’t fully buy into him.
What I did love, though, was the grimoire. I really enjoyed how Jules got to read a book written by her ancestor, filled with medicinal remedies and stories about how she was seen as a “witch” in the community. That was definitely one of my favorite parts. I just wish the grimoire had been a bigger part of the plot. It’s introduced, but then dropped for long stretches, only to show up again later. If it had played a bigger role, I think it would’ve made the story a lot stronger instead of only playing a larger part in the last part of the book.
Okay, now Roman. I really struggled with him. His whole thing of trying to undermine Jules and closer her business wasn’t something I could forgive. I know it’s supposed to be an enemies-to-lovers situation, but if someone tried to sabotage my family business like that, I’d be completely done with them. Sure, Jules thought he was hot and that messed with her head a little, but still, I couldn’t get over how he was actively trying to bring her down and seemed to enjoy and even relish how he was going to put her-and effectively her family-out of business.
And speaking of the enemies-to-lovers thing...this needed way more build-up. One second, Jules is practically spitting fire at Roman, and the next, they’re kissing. There was so little time spent on them actually interacting or building any kind of tension, and then suddenly they’re in love. It just didn’t work for me. By the time Roman was talking about a future with her, I was thinking, “Wait, what future? You’ve barely spent any time together.” The whole thing felt rushed, and I didn’t buy into their romance at all. There was more about her friend’s bachelorette party and a ridiculous yellow dress than actual time spent on their relationship before Roman was confessing his undying love.
So, at the end of the day, I’m giving The Battle of the Bookshops a 1 star. There was potential; a bookstore rivalry, a grimoire, enemies-to-lovers, a seaside town...but it didn’t come together for me. If the plot had been more focused, the rivalry had been stronger, and the romance had been fleshed out better, this could’ve been a great book. But as it is, it just wasn’t my vibe.
What did you think? Loved it, hated it, or thought it was just meh?
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